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[Dae]

On the light wings of the wind
Fly away, my restless mind.
Fly away from cruel sin,
Find some peaceful place to hide.

Heart, absorb the wormth of fire,
Light up with eternal flames,
Hide your old time born desire
From the life's so cruel games.

Reach the stars, my tortured soul,
Drink their bright undying light.
You can brake this tall dark wall.
Break the chains! Get up and smile...

[Анариэль Ровэн]

В ответ на сообщение Dae

On the light wings of the wind
Fly away, my restless mind.
Fly away from cruel sin,
Find some peaceful place to hide.

Heart, absorb the wormth of fire,
Light up with eternal flames,
Hide your old time born desire
From the life's so cruel games.

Reach the stars, my tortured soul,
Drink their bright undying light.
You can brake this tall dark wall.
Break the chains! Get up and smile...

warmth, lit up?, break. И мне не нравится your old time born desire